Postscript to "Stopping the Barbie mentality"

A few weeks ago, I chided pen make Bic for its sexist ads. I'm not the only one. 

Here's an amusing take on what others did with the Bic ad campaign: http://magazine.good.is/articles/bad-ad-backfires?utm_source=TSE&utm_medium=FB&utm_campaign=pd&ts_pid=2


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